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This is my basic idea for Undertale 2. It takes place in a time before Undertale when most of the characters from Undertale 1, were only children or not even born yet. So anyway hope you enjoy!


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Personally I would make Undertale 2 a prequel, explaining some of the unanswered questions of Undertale. Like who was Gaster or How long were the monster trapped underground for?

It would also be a great opportunity to see what some of the characters were like when they were children. I mean, can you just imagine Baby Papyrus? :3

!!! Warning Possible Spoilers !!!




My Undertale 2 Vision:



I would have it, that you play as Monster who is a member of the Royal Guard, who own an apartment in the capital (In this game, you get a much more deep look at Capital and what's it like to live in it). Also since you play as a Monster, you'll get a much deeper look of the Monster Kind's history, culture and... Biology :naughty: . 

The game starts while Asriel and Chara are still alive. However very early on in the game, you get the news of the Chara's and Asriel's deaths. The King is deeply traumatised and holds an emergency meeting with the Royal Guard and Royal Science team. He declares that destroying the Barrier is the number one priority. 

The Royal Guard (The player) is tasked with hunting down and capturing any human that falls in the Underground while the Royal Science Team (including Gaster) is tasked with finding alternative ways to break the Barrier than just having to gather seven humans souls. One of the Human (The Yellow/Justice-soul Human) would actually be the final boss of the game.


Side-Quests:



One of the main focuses of the game, will be the large amount of side-quests. Like Undertale, it would take the troops of side-quests in video games and put on its head. For example, the monsters who ask for your help actually ASSIST (:speechless:)  you, than sitting around, letting you do all the work.

It will be you doing, every-day Royal-Guard tasks/missions or basically police work such as; finding and arresting criminals, guarding items, stopping trouble out on the street etc.

Also by doing certain side-quests will actually change minor things in the main story line. 


Features: 



"RP"/Ranks - (kind of like the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon games) each mission or side-quest you do, will get you "recognition-points" and getting enough of those, will help you move up a rank.

Rookie (0-10 RP) Arrow Bullet (Bright Purple) - F2U!  Royal Guard Officer (10-15 RP ) Arrow Bullet (Bright Purple) - F2U!  Royal Guard Captain (15-20 RP) Arrow Bullet (Bright Purple) - F2U!  Royal Guard Major (20-25 RP)
Arrow Bullet (Bright Purple) - F2U! Royal Science bodyguard (25 - 50 RP) Arrow Bullet (Bright Purple) - F2U!  Personal Royal Bodyguard (50 RP and over).  

By moving up rank, will not only get you new items, clothes, furniture for your apartment, play an important role in the story etc. but it will also affect the way people treat and talk to you. (Example: Treat you with more respect, hold grudges, become your fan or be jealous of you.) 


Battle system - Due to playing as a Monster and Royal Guard member, the battle system is a little different. One of the noticeable changes is that you get a choose from multiple attacks, just like monster you fight in the Undertale 1. You'll be able to customize your move set from a large range moves, most you get though training but others you get though certain event. Your default attacks by leveling up;


Lighting Orb
- shot small objects at the opponent which would look something like this;   :skyblue-orb:  Dealing out; 3 damage per hit. (1 GSK) 4 damage per hit (2 GSK) etc.

Bolt - A simple lighting bolt that covers about a 1/3 of the battle box, looks something like this; Transformer CannonDealing out 20 damage if hits, adding on 3 damage each GSK.

Heal - Can only be used if you have no healing items and three times per battle, heals 1/4 of your health, looks something like this; Charging Up

Charge up - Boosts your AK and DF for 2 turns. Will look something like this;   :powerup:


The battle menu is also a bit different as well:


Fight   Evidence (Key items that can be used to convince a monster to stop, Phoniex-wright style!) Items  Actions  Cuff (Alternative to mercy.)


Growing skill and Skill level, New stats - Another noticeable difference, is the fact that, "execution points" and "Level of Violence" are switch out with two new stats; "Growing skill/GSK" (replacing EXP ) and "Skill Level/SL" (replacing LV). They quite similar to the original stats, however don't get them though killing monsters. Since you are a Monster yourself and a Royal Guard, killing any Monster will get you instant GAME OVER. 

However you get them though arresting criminals by weakening than handcuffing them or conniving them to stop (Earns you more GSK points.) By gaining another GSK it will power up your attacks.

Enemies:

Though there will be a few returning species of monsters, there will be a large focus on new species/enemies. Also you can say goodbye to random encounters, as most others monster won't have a reason for attacking you besides from the odd criminal. In this game, it's much more quality rather than quarter. Each battle can kind of be considered a mini-boss. 

A bit like the Phoenix wright games, though integrating, evidence gathering and dialogue, you will learn a lot about the monsters you go up against, like; Why they're doing this, what's there background, who's their family? etc. 


Extra:

During missions or side quests, you will also get to see younger versions of characters from the first game. You also get to see certain entires mentioned in the Undertale but see them play out in person. Like Undyne trying to fight Asgore and Toriel accentually calling Asgore, "Fluffy-Buns" in a public speech.


Charaters:


Just saying most of the main characters in Undertale won't appear or only have a short apprentice, as the time Undertale 2 takes place, some of the characters ain't even born yet. The only classic characters that play an important role in this game, would be; Asgore, Toriel, Chara and Asriel. 


Lizu/Player (Default name) - You play as small blue liquid-like monster with electrical magic, who joins the Royal Guard just before the start of the game. Like Frisk, they don't have any significant backstory, only that they lived in the capital all their life. Though character-interaction however, you get a basic idea of Lizu's personality; They are a goody-goody, push-over but also has a short-temper and a strong sense of justice.

Fewwy - Is your mentor when you're a rookie, is your right-hand man as an officer and you're goofy side-kick as a Captain/Major. Fewwy is the trickster and clown of the Royal Guard with his dark sense of humor. Either making you laugh or wanting to punch him in the face. Though he definitely does have his soft-side when it comes to cute things. Also he's a complete coward and scary-cat when things get tough. He's a strange looking monster, only can be desired as strange hybrid between an labybird and giraffe. Theme song - You're gonna far, kid.

Boom-Boom (Boom for short) - Hyper and reckless. Boom-boom pretends to be cool, collected and arrogant however when something triggers Boom-boom, her true self is realised for brief time, a complete nutter who loves nothing but adventure and being reckless. She is taunted at her job as a Royal Guard member and highly respected, so when a complete noob comes from nowhere and quickly rises though the ranks, she isn't going to take lying down. 

A rivalry is made between you two, almost the moment you come though the door. She will set little traps to make you look like an fool, however they end up back firing every time so she looks like the fool instead. However over time, Boom-boom learns to respect you and you get a powerful ally in the process.

Torel - The former Royal scientist and Gaster's mentor. Now the leader of the Royal Guard. A monster that appears to be made from a silver and gold metal. His four legs are like shields, that can fold in on themselves in order to turn into a perfect round sphere (Soft of like a Bakugan). With a smaller sphere for a head. 

 Blocky - Blocky is quite the strange character. She's a member of the Royal Science team. She has a strange Addiction with computers, acting like one and even wanting to marry one day. So just like a computer, she is very logical however is honest to the point being completely insensitive. She also lacks understanding of social actions and finds herself at the back end of jokes.

The Human (Yellow soul) - Is the human you attempt to track down though out the first-half of the game. Like all humans in Undertale, they don't speak and only display one noticeable trait, in this case; Justice. This human has just as many kills as mercies, reports saying they act more like a judge. You and Fewwy see the humans a handful times, only exchanging glances with the human - them knowing you or Fewwy's eventual showdown will them is imminent. 


History:  


*Warning: I got kind of carried away here. So this has information not too important to the actual game play/plot, it's just information there for world building. So if you just want the important stuff, skip to "Multip-endings" further down the page.*



Since it's prequel, they'll realize the Royal Guard and Royal Science, you see in Undertale 1, are only fraction of what they use to be. The many occupation use to be thriving, with the Royal Science specially. 

Groups:


The Royal Science Team/University: In this game, you'll find out that Science in the Underground use to be a lot more then just one monster doing it. The whole profession use to be flourishing, with a large University with promising students and an entire science team. During the time of the game, getting out the Underground wasn't the Science team's main priority, instead it was to give the citizens of the Underground a stable and comfortable way of life. Which is why they were creating the core, to get electricity to everyone. It was only when Chara died, this become other wises. 

The University itself is located on upper levels of what is now the True Lads while the Science team have the bottom 3 levels, not needing as much space. Unlike Human Universities; there are no "credits", students don't usually need to live away from home and lessons/courses are much more flexible with a student being able to switch quite often. Though this doesn't make it any less hard. Due to the high demand and pressures, it takes a long time to prepare the students, usually needing more 8 years. Despite its name, the Science University covers several subjects outside of Science, like; Maths, Engineering, Geography, Computing and even a little bit of History.

Even if you are the most prospering student in the entire University, it still won’t guarantee, landing a spot on the Science team as at the end of the day, the Royal Scientist's choose. The Science team work as a close family unit and if Gaster doesn’t like you, then you won’t be getting in. The Science Team rejects will often stay on to become Teachers/Professors. When it comes to needing a new Royal Scientist, it's officially decided by Asgore but he will usually let the old Royal Scinecst make a request on who they want it to be. Though the Science team don't actually having official roles in the University itself. They will often visit and even sometimes teach lessons.

However after Gaster's treason and the "deaths" of the whole Science team, the popularity of the Science as a profession declined dramatically. After, many Monsters become fearful that job was too dangerous. Many students and staff left, so the University was forced to downgrade and relocate to the Capital.


The Royal Guard: Out of all the groups, the Royal Guard is the least changed. They serve as both the Underground's military and police, employing monsters of wide ranges of sizes, specials and skills. Training in the Royal Guard is slight into two main parts; behind front lines and on the front life. When you first start, you will have training sessions with the Head of the Guard and Other High ranking senior members held at either one of their houses or at the Castle. Where they'll teach you basic combat, how to deal with distressed monsters safely, how to track etc.

Though they think the best way of teaching is though experience and once all the basic stuff is out the way, they throw you right into a action! Luckily, you're still given a mentor, so you're not completely blind on what you're doing. Compared to the likes of The Royal Science team, you'll find the Royal Guard is actually quite a
disorganised as a group. Usually holding meetings, training sessions etc at each others houses, not really having a proper place of operation, the only property they actually own, is a shield that simply holds their amor and weapons. Their paper-thin schedule is also often changed at the last minute.

There also many sub-groups, an experienced Royal Guard member might move onto more specific jobs such as Body Guard, S
cavenger (Hired to find specific items, doesn't steal) or Private detective/Bounty hunter (Ain't trust by the Royal Guard and lingering on legal boundaries).  When they become a Body Guard it will usually be for high ranking members of Monster kinds like the Royal scientist or Monarch themselves.  


The Royal Servants/Monks/Nuns - Like the name suggests, they are the servants and advisers of the Royal family, even wearing the Royal crest on their transitional basic robs.(undertale.wikia.com/wiki/File:…) With there being a Head Monk/Nun as their Leader, the current one being Toriel. Living within the Castle itself. They're prefer being pacifists and won't hurt anyone, not even a human if they can help it. However they live to serve the Royal family and if things get out of hands, the Monks will do anything to protect Asgore and his family. They have many roles/jobs involving pacifism like; Teaching, Being Doctors, Psychiatrists, Social workers, Crafters, Artists, builders etc. 


They focus on using
Healing magic. They also serve as the Underground’s medicines alongside the Royal Science University/Team. However the Science team is only reserved for emergencies, when Healing magic and herbs ain’t enough. Once in a stable condition, the injured/sick monster will be sent to the Monks for recovery. Monsters are also able to visit and even stay with the Monks, if they are in of need mental help.

Though Monks are allowed to have children, it is not advised as they think a monster should join free of will, not to be indoctrinated into it from birth. Though they are fine with having married couples within the group. Monsters will usually end up joining the Royal Monks as an adolescent (Needs Guardian's permission) or a Young adult. So they're still young enough to learn all the complex medical training but old enough to still have basic education like basic maths, reading and writing. 



Species: 


Lavran(s) - An ancient species of "lava serpent" Monsters that naturally inhabit underground Manga chambers/caverns. They can be massive, being any where between 10ft to 150ft long. Due to living underground, they're isolated from the rest of Monster kind and they like to pick it that way. They're still animalistic in nature and still have territories that they defend and fight over. As a Lavran ages, become weak, sick etc. their Lava body will slowly hardens, so they begin to gain a rocky outer shell, that first begin to develop as spikes around the face, neck and back. They can actually be used as sign of power however those become fully crystallized are usually exiled to the shore. (Fun fact: The Riverman or Women... It doesn't really matter, is a actually crystallized Lavran)

They fusion similarly to an ant colony, having three main ranks; Worker, Warrior and the Queen . The Queen is the largest female and considered like a Mother-figure for the whole species. The weakest ones (10ft-30ft) who ain't outcasted to the shore, usually become a 'worker', where they'll attend to all the daily needs of a Warrior or Queen, like cleaning. In return the workers will ride on their Warrior's back, giving them free travel and protection (similar to Pilot Fish) . However to be accepted by a Warrior, they must swear their completely loyalty and promise they will never breed.

Then every other Lavran who ain't workers or the Queen, are considered Warriors (30ft+). They live in large family group, made out of Workers and Blood relatives, with 80% workers and 20% warriors. With Workers attending to their daily needs, they can focus on more important duties to; rule over and defend their territories, make alliances with groups, breed and train their young. When a Lavran Warrior becomes an adult, they must choose weither to stay or join another group, with most deciding to leave. 

In the event of Undertale 2, their numbers now dwindle. They only now habit Hotland and not many people trust them, often getting into trouble with Royal Guard. But Asgore is working hard to change Monster's attitudes and make friends with the last of the Lavrans.



Backstory:


Lavrons lived in the Underground for endless generations, even before the rest of Monster kind were sealed inside, when the Underground was just a massive cave system with oceans of Manga. When the Monsters were losing against the Humans, as a last resort, Asgore attempted to get Emperor Arien's (Lavran Leader) help but this turned out to be a fatal mistake. As the Monsters began to venture into the Lavrans' domain, the human abolished them, blocking the exit of the cave. After a great battle, the Monster eventually surrendered and they were sealed inside. 

At first, the other Monsters were fearful, building their first city (The Ruins) in the Entrance of the main caverns, well away from any lava. However living like this, proved to be very difficult, with very little resources and living space. So Asgore was soon forced to announce the Monsters' presence and forced permeant residence. Though Arien was very irritated by this, she understood that there was no way to get rid of them without going to war, so she agreed to give the Monsters the rocky 'shore' (Islands) as living space, as no Lavrans lived there apart from exiles. But only agreed to this under a strict peace Treaty. 

However living on a rocky wasteland wasn't much better with the Lavrons still hogging all the resources. So Asgore was slowly forced to ask for more and more, creating ever heating tension between the two sides. As time went on, the Monsters got more confident, pushing the limits of the Treaty. Using elemental magic, they slowly transformed the Underground from a baron humid cave with endless oceans of manga, to more comfortable habitats like winter wonder lands to blue moon-lit waterfalls.

Then the last straw was given, when they announced their plans to decide the core, a massive machine, the would be built dereatly in the Lava, in the Lavrons' domain. Arien immediately took as a betrayal of the Lavrons' trust and declared war. 

Many bloody battles ensued, with heavy loses on both sides, the time came for Queen Arien's turn to fight. She decided to try and confrount and threaten Asgore himself, but they saw her coming and she meet the full force of the Royal Guard because of it. Though she wasn't going down easily, only after about of a third of the whole Royal Guard being injured or turning to dust, did she finally fall herself. With their leader died, the last of the Lavrons were forced to submit to the rest of Monster kind's official ownership of the entire Underground. Becoming citizens much to their dismay.  Undertale 2 takes place serval years after that war, with an Underground trying to recover. With a high crime rate, lacking population numbers, unbalanced resources etc.  



Multip-endings:



Like in the first game, there are different paths you can take. In Undertale 2 those would be the ; Rookie ending, Neutral Ending and True ending. All depending on how many "recognition-points" you get.

However unlike Undertale, where the consequences are completely different depending on the ending, in my version of Undertale 2, all the endings will eventually lead to the same two key events, just from a different point of view; The "death" of Gaster and You slaying the Yellow-Souled Human.

The endings will have different focuses; The Rookie ending focusing on the Yellow-souled Human, Neutral Ending focuses on the building of Core and the Science Team and the True ending focuses on Gaster.


Rookie Ending (25 RP or less):



You retain your role as an average Royal Guard and ain't able to get too involved with the creation of Core or either with the Science Team/Gaster. So stay with the main case of tracking down the Human. You find out the Human has just killed another Pyrope and you rush to the scene. You and serval other Royal guard members blocked off all possible escape routes from Hotland.

However when you think things can't get any more intense, you hear that Gaster has been declared a traitor and a man-hurt for him in under way. You're tempted to join the man-hunt but before you get too far, there is a gunshpt than explosion at the core in far distance! You see serval figures falling into the coloured mist below.

That's when you see the Human fleeing from the scene and you and Fewwy give chase. You manage to corner the human on a cliff edge and after a long fight, you or Fewwy finally slay the human. (You choose wither its you, who gives the final blow. If you refuse, Fewwy will do it for you.)



Neutral ending (25 RP - 50 RP):



You just barely mange to land the job of a Royal Scientist Team bodyguard. You are now able to experience the kind of work that Gaster's assistants do, first hand. Though when it comes to Gaster himself, not so much... As he doesn't regard you as strong enough to be his personal bodyguard, so tends to ignore you. So you spend most of your time help building the Core.

So you grow more attracted to the rest of the Science team and though them, you learn that Gaster has does some questionable things in the past. Than their suspicious hold true, as when one of the Gaster's students decides to enter an always locked room. Gaster's secrets and illegal experiments are found out about!

You inform the Royal Guard and Asgore of your findings and join the man-hunt for the Gaster. You, The Science team and Asgore all chase Gaster down to the Core. You corner Gaster at a ledge with Asgore begging him to just surrender. However something goes wrong... Gaster tries attacking with a Gaster Baster but there is a gunshot... Causing Gaster to stumble and miss, hitting the floor instead. This causes a huge explosion!

Luckily, you and Asgore are thrown backwards. However the platform that Gaster and the Science team are on, gives way and sends them all plummeting into the void of fog far below.

When you're outside of the Core, Asgore is bewildered of what just happened. This is when Boom-Boom comes rushing up, screaming that they've seen a human and trying to catch them. Asgore, still too traumatised to do anything, tells you to go on without him and capture the human quickly before they get away.

You end up to catching up with the human and with the help of Fewwy and Boom-Boom defeat them once and for all.



True ending (50 RP or over):



You get assigned to the new role of a Royal Scientist team bodyguard. Here, you get a much closer look at the 'experiments' the Science team do. Since you were a powerful and respected when you were a Royal Guard member, Gaster feels more comfortable as you as his Body Guard. 

After a while, he begins to let his guard around you and you begin to notice some of the work he does is a bit... shifty. Than one day, you decide to enter Gaster's private lab and see if you're suspicions are right. That's when you find it, his illegal experiments. That's when Gaster comes into the room.

Gaster tries to lie to you at first but quickly realises you ain't going to fall for it. He suddenly makes a break for it and you give chase. When some other Science team members come out to see what's going on, you shout Blocky to tell the Royal guard and Asgore, that Gaster is a traitor.

You track Gaster down to the Core before anyone else. You and Gaster talk briefly before Asgore and the Science team arrived. Suddenly Gaster tries to use a Gaster-Blaster but its attack is reflected with the sound of a gunshot and Gaster with the rest of the Science team is sent plummeting.

That's when you see a human in the far distance and go after them in rage. When you reach the human, they're already surrounded by Royal Guards and you join them, ready to fight them...




So that's the basic story. If you have any questions just put it down in the comments! 


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Idea, Writing (c) Me.
Undertale (c) Toby Fox.
So I'll off for a while, so I want to post something before I go, so here it is. A sneak peak of another What if Warriors story. Hope you enjoy! 



This was a sneak peak for:     What if Mapleshade's Kits Had lived part 1.Ok, finally a full part of my story, What if Mapleshade's kits had lived! I don't how many parts I'll have to this but we'll see how it goes. Anyway hope you enjoy! 
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Story:
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Mapleshade moved through the thick layers of bracken covering the wooden floor, Patchkit’s scurf gripped in her teeth and her two other kits bundling on behind her. Finally they had made it to the Riverclan border, only a raging river not standing in their way. The river borrowed though the territories like a weaving snake, letting nothing get in its way. Patchkit had be carried for too long, starting to squirm and whimper, forcing her to put him down.
Mapleshade twisted her head, glaring by into the woodland landscape, looking for any glimpses of movement of pelts.  Paranoid, they could be attacked by an enraged Thunderclan patrol at any moment. Knowing that some of her traitorous former
         


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Story:


Mapleshade moved through the thick layers of bracken covering the wooden floor, Patchkit’s scurf gripped in her teeth and her two other kits bundling on behind her. Finally they had made it to the Riverclan border, only a raging river not standing in their way. The river borrowed though the territories like a weaving snake, letting nothing get in its way. Patchkit had been carried for too long, starting to squirm and whimper, forcing her to put him down.


Mapleshade twisted her head, glaring by into the woodland landscape, looking for any glimpses of movement of pelts. Paranoid, they could be attacked by an enraged Thunderclan patrol at any moment. Knowing that some of her traitorous former Clanmates thought exile was too good for Half-bloods. Which disgusted her.


Patchkit hang his head and tail low in sorrow, “Why does Thunderclan hate us, mother? Why do we have to leave? What do we do wrong?”, spending a wave of questions at her. “We did nothing wrong.”, Mapleshade growled, “It’s them that’s the problem, not us!”, losing her temper slightly. She turned away from him before she made things worse, “Good for nothing fox hearts.”, she muttered under her breath. Sitting down on the sandy earth, she tried to clear her head. Then she felt tiny paws grip her leg as Larchkit reared up on his back legs to meet his mother’s eyes, “But we want to go back. I want to go back to camp and the necessary.”. Mapleshade shook her head, “Forget about camp. Forget about the necessary. We are outcasts now, you need to understand that. We can’t go back. Or they’ll hurt us if we do.”.


Petalkit took a step closer to the rushing water, staring at it with eyes the sizes of moons. “Do we have to swim in there again?”, the she-cat asked nervously. Mapleshade paused looking down at the speeding current, “Not yet.”, using her tail to draw her kit away from the edge. The water hissed and spat as it slammed against the rocky shore. The river was a lot higher then she remembered, completely submerging nearby reeds under its murky surface. Her worry only grew as her gaze drifted up stream. She hissed, the stepping stones had been completely submerged as well! Only two pathetic grey stumps were left managing to peek up above the waves, which were useless is trying to cross.


It would be luckily if she made it across in one piece herself, let alone tiny 2 moon old kits. She had to consider her options carefully, if she didn’t want anyone being washing away or drowning. She could try and take them over one by one but Oakstar had only given her until Sunhigh to leave and the sun was already flying high in the sky. It would take too long, putting them too at risk of being attacked by a patrol. Or she could carry one while the other swam by her- Was she mouse brained? They wouldn’t survive that. She decided to go for broke, simply combining the two ideas together.


She crouched down at the river’s edge, “Larchkit, Petalkit, climb on my back.”, she told them. They seemed confused but didn’t question it as they wriggled on top of her. When they were both in position, surrounded by her patchy thick fur. “Ok, now listen to me because this is very important.”, she explained, with both of their full attention, “You must hold onto me as tightly as you can, use your claws to grip me.”. Petalkit obediently nodded but Latchkit began to look distressed, “But won’t that hurt you?”. Mapleshade shook her head, trying not give away how scared she was herself, “Don’t worry about me, just make sure to use your claws, as deep as they will go.”.


She winced slightly as thorn-like claws dug into her flesh while they shifted around, preparing themselves. As she began to stand on long legs, Patchkit leapt in front of her, “What about me?”, he asked blinking. Not bothering to say anymore, she leaned down and took him by the scruff once more. Luckily, no one was making a fuss. With a final deep sigh, Mapleshade took her first step into the water. Immediately, even with little as a paw in, she felt the immense strength of the current. It was also bitterly ice cold, as it creeped down into her bones. The gravel under her paws shifted and shield as it gave under her weight. She dug her claws into sandy shoreline as she took one strenuous step after the other. It was already this harsh and she hadn’t even made it half way. For a heartbeat, she felt tempted to leap back onto to the safe dry land but quickly banished those thoughts to back of her mind. There was no going back now!


She plagued into the deep end, submerging almost her entire body, all but her neck, head and precious cargo. She couldn't feel the pebbles under her paws anymore. It was only her and the river now. She felt the tiny claws digging into her neck, go deeper. Her become fur soaked as it absorbed the water, weighing her down. It felt like she was carrying a pile of pebbles in her stomach. Patchkit let out whales of terror as the waves began to reach out for his dangling legs. 



To be continued...




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Writing (c) Me.
Warrior cats (c) Erin hunter.

Ok, finally a full part of my story, What if Mapleshade's kits had lived! I don't how many parts I'll have to this but we'll see how it goes. Anyway hope you enjoy! 

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Mapleshade moved through the thick layers of bracken covering the wooden floor, Patchkit’s scruff gripped in her teeth and her two other kits bundling on behind her. Finally they had made it to the Riverclan border, only a raging river not standing in their way. The river borrowed though the territories like a weaving snake, letting nothing get in its way. Patchkit had be carried for too long, starting to squirm and whimper, forcing her to put him down.

Mapleshade twisted her head, glaring by into the woodland landscape, looking for any glimpses of movement of pelts.  Paranoid, they could be attacked by an enraged Thunderclan patrol at any moment. Knowing that some of her traitorous former Clanmates thought exile was too good for Half-bloods. Which disgusted her.


Patchkit hang his head and tail low in sorrow, “Why does Thunderclan hate us, mother? Why do we have to leave? What do we do wrong?”, spending a wave of questions at her. “We did nothing wrong.”, Mapleshade growled, “It’s them that’s the problem, not us!”, losing her temper slightly. She turned away from him before she made things worse, “Good for nothing fox hearts.”, she muttered under her breath. Sitting down on the sandy earth, she tried to clear her head. Then she felt tiny paws grip her leg as Larchkit reared up on his back legs to meet his mother’s eyes, “But we want to go back. I want to go back to camp and the necessary.”. Mapleshade shook her head, “Forget about camp. Forget about the necessary. We are outcasts now, you need to understand that. We can’t go back. Or they’ll hurt us if we do.”.

Petalkit took a step closer to the rushing water, staring at it with eyes the sizes of moons. “Do we have to swim in there again?”, the she-cat asked nervously. Mapleshade paused looking down at the speeding current, “Not yet.”, using her tail to draw her kit away from the edge. The water hissed and spat as it slammed against the rocky shore. The river was a lot higher then she remembered, completely submerging nearby reeds under its murky surface. Her worry only grew as her gaze drifted up stream. She hissed, the stepping stones had been completely submerged as well! Only two pathetic grey stumps were left managing to peek up above the waves, which were useless is trying to cross.

It would be luckily if she made it across in one piece herself, let alone tiny 2 moon old kits.  She had to consider her options carefully, if she didn’t want anyone being washing away or drowning. She could try and take them over one by one but Oakstar had only given her until Sunhigh to leave and the sun was already flying high in the sky. It would take too long, putting them too at risk of being attacked by a patrol. Or she could carry one while the other swam by her- Was she mouse brained? They wouldn’t survive that. She decided to go for broke, simply combining the two ideas together.


She crouched down at the river’s edge,  “Larchkit, Petalkit, climb on my back.”, she told them. They seemed confused but didn’t question it as they wriggled on top of her. When they were both in position, surrounded by her patchy thick fur.  “Ok, now listen to me because this is very important.”, she explained, with both of their full attention,  “You must hold onto me as tightly as you can, use your claws to grip me.”. Petalkit obediently nodded but Latchkit began to look distressed, “But won’t that hurt you?”. Mapleshade shook her head, trying not give away how scared she was herself, “Don’t worry about me, just make sure to use your claws, as deep as they will go.”.

She winced slightly as thorn-like claws dug into her flesh while they shifted around, preparing themselves. As she began to stand on long legs, Patchkit leapt in front of her, “What about me?”, he asked blinking. Not bothering to say anymore, she leaned down and took him by the scruff once more. Luckily, no one was making a fuss. With a final deep sigh, Mapleshade took her first step into the water. Immediately, even with little as a paw in, she felt the immense strength of the current. It was also bitterly ice cold, as it creeped down into her bones. The gravel under her paws shifted and shield as it gave under her weight. She dug her claws into sandy shoreline as she took one strenuous step after the other. It was already this harsh and she hadn’t even made it half way. For a heartbeat, she felt tempted to leap back onto to the safe dry land but quickly banished those thoughts to back of her mind. There was no going back now!




She plagued into the deep end, submerging almost her entire body, all but her neck, head and precious cargo. She felt the claws digging into her neck, go deeper. Her fur become soaked as it absorbed the water, weighing her down. It felt like she was carrying a pile of pebbles in her stomach.  Patchkit let out whales of terror as the waves began to reach out for his bangerling legs. She strained her muscles, trying raise her head further from the brown swirling liquid that threatened her kit’s life. Patchkit’s whales faded to timid whimper.

Mapleshade’s eyes glanced over to the nearby shore, layers of foam was building up against the jagged rocks, like thick yellowish walls of fog blocking her escape. Speckles of dirty water, splashed up into her amber eyes, the salty texture of it making her eyes sting. She needed to get out this river quickly. Gathering up her strength, she kicked hard at the blue void, heaving herself across the river. Slowly she got into a rhythm like running across the Thunderclan forest, darting after squirrels; kick, pause, kick, pause. Mapleshade was making better progress now, she was over halfway now. Just a bit further- However her long strides with brief pauses for critical moments of rest, soon turned to frantic paddling. She going in the opposite direction she wanted! A swift undercurrent had grasped her, taking her with it. Deshight how much she fought it, how much she willed it, she couldn’t win against it.

She kicked harder and harder, the water dragging her quicker and quicker, tiring her faster and faster- A hard grey subject stabbed into her throat as she slammed against one of the sharpen edges of the stepping stones. There was movement from above her as Larchkit and Petalkit jerked at the sudden impact, barely holding on. Pain surged through her as the sharp rock dug into her windpipe.

In that heartbeat, her own body betrayed her. She couldn’t help it. The urge was just too great. Her mouth slipped open as she let out a cry of agony, with Patchkit sent hurling towards the raging water. In unison, the family cried out for their falling member, “Patchkit!”, as he was swallowed up, dragged under the water’s surface. Mapleshade watched helplessly as he flailed desperately to keep above the surface but the current kept dragging him under. Only rarely did his small ginger head bobbed up to get a few important moments to gasp for air. He was being taken away so fast, downstream, it was like a dream. She was daze.


No! Just before Mapleshade ungripped the safety of the what was left of the stepping step, to go after him, there was movement on the far bank. There was a flash of creamy brown. Appledusk! Her heart soared as her mate darted forward like a fox and plunged into the river after their son. His brown fur disappearing into the swirling blue depths of the river. Move pelts emerged from the swishing reeds of Riverclan’s territory, the warriors looked stunned at the strange scene of; Mapleshade clinging on the stepping stone while two kits whaled on her head as they cried out for their brother.


Driving in, they swam towards her, gliding through the rampaging water with ease as a Windclan cat would almost fly over the moors. Larchkit and Petalkit handled together as a pale tom and grey tabby she-cat took placed on either side of Mapleshade. The smell of fish clung to her nose. Her fur bristled as they clamped her down with their flakes, dragging her the last of the way across the river. Her instincts told her to claw their ears off but she didn’t. It was against everything she’d been told as she grew up; Riverclan was the foe and they wouldn’t hesitate to kill you. But she couldn’t, this may be her only chance of living.

Relief flooded over as she began to felt a hard surface under her paw pads again. Safety at last. As they went into the swallows, the pale tom, Splashfoot bit down into her neck fur and forcefully yanked her out the water, throwing her against the shore. She let out a yowl of surprise and anger. Both kits were sent tumbling off her back, rolling onto the ground. When Larchkit and Petalkit saw their mother begin to sit up, they scrambled between her legs, getting to the shelter of her belly. Their heads popped out from under her, nervously, their ears pricked and noses twitching. Mapleshade had her ears flatten, ready for the Riverclan cats’ imminent threats. But surprisingly, Eletail’s and Splashfoot’s attention wasn’t on her, instead their eyes were up stream, she followed their gaze.  Then it hit her like a falling tree, “Why hasn’t Appledusk returned with Patchkit yet?”, she demanded.


Luckily, a short distance away, further up stream, Appledusk gripped the rocks, heaving himself out of the water. With a white and ginger bundle in his mouth. Patchkit was safe! Both cats were soaked to the bone and dripping wet, leaving a trail behind them like a slug as Appledusk padded towards the small crowd of cats. Appledusk dropped the kit on the floor. Mapleshade dived on Patchkit, protectively wrapping her paws around him and grooming him down.  He violently  shivered and was stiff with cold. Letting off a sickly sneeze as well. She licked him more, desperately trying to warm him. Whispering into his ear, “I’m sorry, little one. I’ll never let you slip from my paws like that ever again. I promise.”.

Larchkit and Petalkit went up to their brother, relief scent arose from them. “Make sure not to go on crazy adventures like that, without me next time.”, Larchkit teased playfully, prodding at his brother’s nose. Patchkit gave off a weak smile.


“Thank yo-”, she began raised her head to her mate, Appledusk but her words were cut off. Instead of seeing a warm welcoming grin from what she expected from a tom seeing his mate and kits in a long time, his green eyes were; cold, unwelcoming, bitter, angry and questioning. As she lay there, with her kits in her arms, her heart, which was soaring only a few heartbeats ago, was sinking like a boulder. They were his kits, they were family. Was wasn’t he pleased to see them? Wasn’t he pleased to see her?



“What were you thinking!?”, a loud and angry she-cat’s voice rang throughout the whole forest, breaking into Mapleshade’s swarming clouds of dark thoughts. Mapleshade turned sharply to meet the glare of Eletail, both of their tails lashing. Mapleshade knew this cat from reputation alone; Senior Warrior, Retired queen, mentor of three separate apprentices and proud mother of two successful litters. Her graying muzzle and battle-worn pelt certainly showed that. Eletail continued her rant, “Making 2 moon old kits swim in a river? With high currents? One of them almost drowned!”, her eyes flickering towards Patchkit. She didn’t make them swim, she carried them, Larchkit and Petalkit were almost completely dry, Mapleshade thought her unspoken argument. “You know , it just shows how terrible of mother you are when you need a cat from another clan to save your own kit.”, she muttered. Mapleshade’s fur flared, claws scraping across the stone under her paws. How dare you! Mapleshade secretly shouted in her head. But she fought back the snarl forming in her throat. Despite how much she hated it, she had to be remind calm and friendly if she wanted any chance of being accepted into Riverclan and giving her kits a future.



What she did and said in those next few moments could decide everything. Eletail flicked her tail tip and tried to nose Mapleshade to her paws, “Come on”, Eletail urged sternly, “You or your kits shouldn't be on Riverclan territory. We know a better way around the river, you can return home safely from there.”.  Just as Eletail and Splashfoot began to pad away, expecting Mapleshade to follow, she mewed, “Sorry but I can’t.”. Splashfoot halted, turning his head over his broad shoulder, “I’m sorry, what?”.

Mapleshade sat up, puffing up her chest. “We were kicked out by Oakstar.”, she explained, “We can’t go back to Thunderclan anymore.”. The two Riverclan warriors looked at each other, confused. Appledusk continued to hover in background. Splashfoot took a step forward, sniffing at the kits huddled together behind Mapleshade’s front legs, “So why bring them here?”.


Mapleshade let out a long lasting sigh. Her blood boiling from the growing bread of the terrifying moment that loomed over her. No going back now. She glanced at Appledusk, still as silent and stiff as a frozen tree trunk. “I was hoping you could let us join Riverclan.”, she simply said. Splashfoot snorted, “And would we take in Thunderclan exiles?”, he mewed with a taunting tone. Swallowing back another sigh, Mapleshade readied herself for the answer that would change everything. There was no point in lying now. She twisted her tail around her kits, protecting them if something went wrong. “Because those ain’t just Thunderclan kits. They’ve got Riverclan blood in them as well!”, she declared. Eletail’s muscles strained, “How?”, she snarled.  


“Because Appledusk is their father!”, she announce. The truth was out…


All eyes widen in shock, including the two Riverclan warriors and her own kits. Even Appledusk shifted uneasily in his sitting position, surprised that she had the guts to tell their ultimate secret like that. Splashfoot twisted on his front paw to directly face his clanmate, his smokey grey tail bushed up, making him look as a huge as a Lionclan warrior. “Traitor!”, he yowled, lunging, claws first, straight towards the brown tom. Then Eletail run in, rearing up and grabbing Splashfoot by the scruff mid-air and slamming him onto the hard earth. The struggling cats spat in hatred, “Why are you defending him?”.

Eletail had her fur on end and ears flatten, clearing finding it hard not to rip the fur off of Appledusk herself. Ignoring the cat flailing under her weight, her attention turned to Appledusk, “Is it true? Are you the father of Mapleshade’s kits?”, she asked while growling. Appledusk took while before answering his expression blank, “Yes.”, he finally admitted. Petalkit dashed from under Mapleshade before she could grab the she-kit. Petalkit stared at Appledusk with wide eyes. “You can’t be our father”, she shouted. It pained Mapleshade to see her daughter like this, “I’m sorry Petalkit, but he is your father.”, trying to soothe the distressed young cat. “But I don’t want him to be my father. He smells funny, he’s from Riverclan and all the elders were telling me how he’s the one who killed Birchface and Flowerpaw!”.


Larchkit joined in beside his sister, facing Mapleshade while Patchkit crowded under her, “We don’t want a killer as a father!”. All the cats around the kits looked at them, speechless. Guilt flooded over Mapleshade. Maybe she should never let Appledusk be the father of her kin, if it caused them this much shame and horror. Surprisingly, Appledusk finally spoke properly, coming to his own defense, “It was accident. I would never kill a warrior let alone an apprentice out of cold blood like that.”. Both kits reminded silent.

No one dared move. It felt as if time itself had stopped. Splashfoot had finally calmed down, going limp, so Eletail stopped pinning him down, allowing him to stand. Eletail bared her white longs fangs, “We’re taking you and your kits back to camp. Only Darkstar will know how to deal with this situation.”. Mapleshade hesitantly nodded, “Fine.”.

The group set off, leaving the river behind them and padding into the tree-line. Mapleshade felt slightly relieved to get away from the thing that had almost taken her kits away forever. With Eletail marching on ahead and Splashfoot at the rear to make sure no one tried to make an escape, leaving Mapleshade and Appledusk to awkwardly walk side by side.  She wanted to say something but didn’t want to risk making anything worse. Instead she made a more subtle move, twinning her thick tail with his long short-haired one.  No one noticed but Appledusk. He gave off a sad yet for some reason guilty smile.


A hunched up Larchkit was grasped in her mouth. Out of all of her kits, she feared he most likely would do something outrageous. He was pulling off a strope, tightening up in annoyance. Clearly hating be carried. Patchkit and Petalkit stayed as close to Mapleshade as possible, scared of this alien territory. They’ll get use to it once we’re here for a while, she told herself.  They were heading to the camp now, all she needed to do was get their sympathy. Maybe, just maybe, getting exiled was a part of a destiny for greater things. What was Starclan planning for them?





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Writing (c) Me.
Warrior Cats (c) Erin Hunter. 


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This is the Allegiance for my story,  Snowkit's fall. A what if story about Snowkit living though the hawk attack. It Takes place just after the entries of Darkest hour and stops before the entries of Midnight (About a 18 moon time gap) . Then 'co-exists' along side the entries of Firestar's quest.

There are some OCs in this Allegiance, to fill it up a bit, due to lack of cannon characters. Also some apprentices have be given new mentors after they were left 'mentorless' after the entries of Darkest hour. (Ex: Jaggedthooth - Rowanpaw and Stonefur - Stormpaw. )


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Note: This allegiance is not cannon is any way. It's meant to show the Clans, about a half-moon after Bloodclan is driven out of the Forest. If there are any inconsistences, please tell me.

*Also possible spoilers for the Warriors series and for Snowkit's fall.*



Shadowclan:


Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws, just received his nine lives.


Deputy: Russetfur - Dark ginger she-cat (Apprentice, Cedarpaw)

Medicine Cat(s):
Littlecloud - very small tabby tom (Apprentice, Hazepaw)


Warriors: 


Oakfur- small light brown tom (Apprentice, Tawnypaw)

Applefur - mottled brown she-cat with pale green eyes


Brownpelt - rich dark brown tom with a speckle of ginger (Apprentice, Gritpaw) 

Bushfeather - Dark brown she-cat with 'splash' black markings running down her back (Apperntice, Rowanpaw )

Snowbird - pure white sleek she-cat

Lochbreath - Mottled white cat with black tail-tip

 
Nightwing - is a slender black she-cat

Wildfur - Silver tom with spiked fur. 

Swancloud- grey tom with white specks(Apprentice, Riftpaw) 

Tangleburr - Grey and brown she-cat

Palefoot - Thick furred Smokey grey tabby tom

Wetfoot - Grey tabby tom with large paw

Flintfang - gray tom with dim amber eyes

Ratscar - scarred dark drown tom with a patchy tail


Stumpytail- is a brown tom with darker stripes and a short tail.

Tufteye - Mottled ginger and white tom with blue eyes, with an ear missing.

Plaintail - Silver tabby she-cat with pure white tail

       

Apprentices:

 Tawnypaw - pale tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.

 Cedarpaw - dark grey tom with amber eyes

 Gritpaw - thick-furred mottled blackish brown tom .

 
 Riftpaw - Grey tabby she-cat with amber eyes

 Hazepaw - white she-cat with tabby brown patches and pale green eyes

 Rowanpaw - is a lithe dark ginger tom with green eyes

       

Queens:

Petalfoot - is a pale brown spotted Queen with dark blue eyes (Mother of Flintfang's kits; Quickkit, Rockkit and Limekit)

Saltfur - Very small light grey Queen with Fluffy fur (Mother of Rust
kit, a tiny sicky ginger kit.)

Tallpoppy - Light brown tabby she-cat (Mother of Blackstar's first litter, Smokekit and Snakekit.) 



Elders:


Runningnose - small gray-and-white tom, formerly the medicine cat

Fernshade - a Tortoiseshell she-cat

Rowanberry - cream and brown she-cat


Wolfstep - white and grey tabby tom with long legs.




Thunderclan: 


Leader: Firestar - Flame-colored ginger tabby Tom (Apprentice, Bramblepaw.) 

Deputy: Greystripe - Large grey tom with amber eyes 

Medicine Cat(s): Cinderpelt - Gray she-cat with limp

Warriors: 

Sandstorm - Pale ginger she-cat

Longtail - tabby tom with dark black stripes (Apprentice, Fernpaw.)

Cloudtail - Long-haired white tom 

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom 

Thornclaw - Golden brown tom

Dustpelt - Dark brown tom (Apprentice, Ashpaw.)

Brightheart - White she-cat with light ginger patches, will be moving to the Nursery soon


Queens: 

Willowpelt - Pale silver she-cat (Mother of Whitestorm's kits; Sootkit, Rainkit and Sorrelkit.) 

Ferncloud - Pale grey she-cat with darker flecks (Expecting Dustpelt's first litter.)


Elders:

Goldenflower -pale ginger she-cat

Frostfur - beautiful white she-cat with blue eyes

Dappletail - tortoiseshell she-cat

Speckletail - pale tabby 

One-eye -pale gray she-cat, virtually blind and deaf





Riverclan: 


Leader: Leopardstar -unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat

Deputy
: Mistyfoot - Blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes (Apprentice, Featherpaw)

Medicine Cat(s)
: Mudfur -long-haired light brown tom

Warriors:

Blackclaw -smoky black tom

Heavystep -thickset tabby tom (Apprentice, Dawnpaw)

Loudbelly -dark brown tom 

Shadepelt - Smokey dark grey she-cat (Apprentice, Stormpaw) 

Swallowtail - Young dark tabby she-cat


Apprentices:

Dawnpaw- Grey she-cat

Featherpaw - Silver she-cat

Stormpaw - Dark grey tom


Queens:

Mosspelt -tortoiseshell she-cat (Mother of Frogleap's kits; Willowkit and Dawnkit.) 




Windclan:


Leader: Tallstar - elderly black-and-white tom with a very long tail

Deputy: Deadfoot -mottled dark brown tom

Medicine Cat(s): Barkface- short-tailed brown tom

Warriors:

Wetfoot - dark gray tabby tom

Mudclaw - Brown tabby tom 

Tornear - tabby tom

Onewhisker  - light brown tabby tom

Runningbrook - light gray she-cat

Rushtail - creamy brown tom

Oatwhisker - elderly Tabby brown tom


Queens:

Ashfoot - gray queen (Expecting Deadfoot's second litter.)

Morningflower - tortoiseshell queen

Whitetail - small white she-cat (Mother of Onewhisker's kits; Drizzelkit and Rustlekit) 


Cats outside of the Clans:


Lucky - Large creamy brown elderly she-cat with a missing tail.

Snow - Young white tom who is deaf, use to live in Thunderclan.


Boulder - Ruffled stoney grey tom, driven out of Shadowclan after Tigerstar's death. 

Nightwhisker - Brown specked, small tom, driven out of Shadowclan after Tigerstar's death. 



Extra notes:

Swancloud (Father) = Lochbreath (Daughter).

Brownpelt (Father) + Plaintail (Mother) = Riftpaw (Daughter) and Hazepaw (Daughter).

Palefoot (Brother)/ Plaintail (Sister) 



 
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Writing, OCs (c) Me.
Warrior Cats series (c) Erin hunter. 

 

Ok, finally a full part of my story, What if Mapleshade's kits had lived! I don't how many parts I'll have to this but we'll see how it goes. Anyway hope you enjoy! 

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Mapleshade moved through the thick layers of bracken covering the wooden floor, Patchkit’s scruff gripped in her teeth and her two other kits bundling on behind her. Finally they had made it to the Riverclan border, only a raging river not standing in their way. The river borrowed though the territories like a weaving snake, letting nothing get in its way. Patchkit had be carried for too long, starting to squirm and whimper, forcing her to put him down.

Mapleshade twisted her head, glaring by into the woodland landscape, looking for any glimpses of movement of pelts.  Paranoid, they could be attacked by an enraged Thunderclan patrol at any moment. Knowing that some of her traitorous former Clanmates thought exile was too good for Half-bloods. Which disgusted her.


Patchkit hang his head and tail low in sorrow, “Why does Thunderclan hate us, mother? Why do we have to leave? What do we do wrong?”, spending a wave of questions at her. “We did nothing wrong.”, Mapleshade growled, “It’s them that’s the problem, not us!”, losing her temper slightly. She turned away from him before she made things worse, “Good for nothing fox hearts.”, she muttered under her breath. Sitting down on the sandy earth, she tried to clear her head. Then she felt tiny paws grip her leg as Larchkit reared up on his back legs to meet his mother’s eyes, “But we want to go back. I want to go back to camp and the necessary.”. Mapleshade shook her head, “Forget about camp. Forget about the necessary. We are outcasts now, you need to understand that. We can’t go back. Or they’ll hurt us if we do.”.

Petalkit took a step closer to the rushing water, staring at it with eyes the sizes of moons. “Do we have to swim in there again?”, the she-cat asked nervously. Mapleshade paused looking down at the speeding current, “Not yet.”, using her tail to draw her kit away from the edge. The water hissed and spat as it slammed against the rocky shore. The river was a lot higher then she remembered, completely submerging nearby reeds under its murky surface. Her worry only grew as her gaze drifted up stream. She hissed, the stepping stones had been completely submerged as well! Only two pathetic grey stumps were left managing to peek up above the waves, which were useless is trying to cross.

It would be luckily if she made it across in one piece herself, let alone tiny 2 moon old kits.  She had to consider her options carefully, if she didn’t want anyone being washing away or drowning. She could try and take them over one by one but Oakstar had only given her until Sunhigh to leave and the sun was already flying high in the sky. It would take too long, putting them too at risk of being attacked by a patrol. Or she could carry one while the other swam by her- Was she mouse brained? They wouldn’t survive that. She decided to go for broke, simply combining the two ideas together.


She crouched down at the river’s edge,  “Larchkit, Petalkit, climb on my back.”, she told them. They seemed confused but didn’t question it as they wriggled on top of her. When they were both in position, surrounded by her patchy thick fur.  “Ok, now listen to me because this is very important.”, she explained, with both of their full attention,  “You must hold onto me as tightly as you can, use your claws to grip me.”. Petalkit obediently nodded but Latchkit began to look distressed, “But won’t that hurt you?”. Mapleshade shook her head, trying not give away how scared she was herself, “Don’t worry about me, just make sure to use your claws, as deep as they will go.”.

She winced slightly as thorn-like claws dug into her flesh while they shifted around, preparing themselves. As she began to stand on long legs, Patchkit leapt in front of her, “What about me?”, he asked blinking. Not bothering to say anymore, she leaned down and took him by the scruff once more. Luckily, no one was making a fuss. With a final deep sigh, Mapleshade took her first step into the water. Immediately, even with little as a paw in, she felt the immense strength of the current. It was also bitterly ice cold, as it creeped down into her bones. The gravel under her paws shifted and shield as it gave under her weight. She dug her claws into sandy shoreline as she took one strenuous step after the other. It was already this harsh and she hadn’t even made it half way. For a heartbeat, she felt tempted to leap back onto to the safe dry land but quickly banished those thoughts to back of her mind. There was no going back now!




She plagued into the deep end, submerging almost her entire body, all but her neck, head and precious cargo. She felt the claws digging into her neck, go deeper. Her fur become soaked as it absorbed the water, weighing her down. It felt like she was carrying a pile of pebbles in her stomach.  Patchkit let out whales of terror as the waves began to reach out for his bangerling legs. She strained her muscles, trying raise her head further from the brown swirling liquid that threatened her kit’s life. Patchkit’s whales faded to timid whimper.

Mapleshade’s eyes glanced over to the nearby shore, layers of foam was building up against the jagged rocks, like thick yellowish walls of fog blocking her escape. Speckles of dirty water, splashed up into her amber eyes, the salty texture of it making her eyes sting. She needed to get out this river quickly. Gathering up her strength, she kicked hard at the blue void, heaving herself across the river. Slowly she got into a rhythm like running across the Thunderclan forest, darting after squirrels; kick, pause, kick, pause. Mapleshade was making better progress now, she was over halfway now. Just a bit further- However her long strides with brief pauses for critical moments of rest, soon turned to frantic paddling. She going in the opposite direction she wanted! A swift undercurrent had grasped her, taking her with it. Deshight how much she fought it, how much she willed it, she couldn’t win against it.

She kicked harder and harder, the water dragging her quicker and quicker, tiring her faster and faster- A hard grey subject stabbed into her throat as she slammed against one of the sharpen edges of the stepping stones. There was movement from above her as Larchkit and Petalkit jerked at the sudden impact, barely holding on. Pain surged through her as the sharp rock dug into her windpipe.

In that heartbeat, her own body betrayed her. She couldn’t help it. The urge was just too great. Her mouth slipped open as she let out a cry of agony, with Patchkit sent hurling towards the raging water. In unison, the family cried out for their falling member, “Patchkit!”, as he was swallowed up, dragged under the water’s surface. Mapleshade watched helplessly as he flailed desperately to keep above the surface but the current kept dragging him under. Only rarely did his small ginger head bobbed up to get a few important moments to gasp for air. He was being taken away so fast, downstream, it was like a dream. She was daze.


No! Just before Mapleshade ungripped the safety of the what was left of the stepping step, to go after him, there was movement on the far bank. There was a flash of creamy brown. Appledusk! Her heart soared as her mate darted forward like a fox and plunged into the river after their son. His brown fur disappearing into the swirling blue depths of the river. Move pelts emerged from the swishing reeds of Riverclan’s territory, the warriors looked stunned at the strange scene of; Mapleshade clinging on the stepping stone while two kits whaled on her head as they cried out for their brother.


Driving in, they swam towards her, gliding through the rampaging water with ease as a Windclan cat would almost fly over the moors. Larchkit and Petalkit handled together as a pale tom and grey tabby she-cat took placed on either side of Mapleshade. The smell of fish clung to her nose. Her fur bristled as they clamped her down with their flakes, dragging her the last of the way across the river. Her instincts told her to claw their ears off but she didn’t. It was against everything she’d been told as she grew up; Riverclan was the foe and they wouldn’t hesitate to kill you. But she couldn’t, this may be her only chance of living.

Relief flooded over as she began to felt a hard surface under her paw pads again. Safety at last. As they went into the swallows, the pale tom, Splashfoot bit down into her neck fur and forcefully yanked her out the water, throwing her against the shore. She let out a yowl of surprise and anger. Both kits were sent tumbling off her back, rolling onto the ground. When Larchkit and Petalkit saw their mother begin to sit up, they scrambled between her legs, getting to the shelter of her belly. Their heads popped out from under her, nervously, their ears pricked and noses twitching. Mapleshade had her ears flatten, ready for the Riverclan cats’ imminent threats. But surprisingly, Eletail’s and Splashfoot’s attention wasn’t on her, instead their eyes were up stream, she followed their gaze.  Then it hit her like a falling tree, “Why hasn’t Appledusk returned with Patchkit yet?”, she demanded.


Luckily, a short distance away, further up stream, Appledusk gripped the rocks, heaving himself out of the water. With a white and ginger bundle in his mouth. Patchkit was safe! Both cats were soaked to the bone and dripping wet, leaving a trail behind them like a slug as Appledusk padded towards the small crowd of cats. Appledusk dropped the kit on the floor. Mapleshade dived on Patchkit, protectively wrapping her paws around him and grooming him down.  He violently  shivered and was stiff with cold. Letting off a sickly sneeze as well. She licked him more, desperately trying to warm him. Whispering into his ear, “I’m sorry, little one. I’ll never let you slip from my paws like that ever again. I promise.”.

Larchkit and Petalkit went up to their brother, relief scent arose from them. “Make sure not to go on crazy adventures like that, without me next time.”, Larchkit teased playfully, prodding at his brother’s nose. Patchkit gave off a weak smile.


“Thank yo-”, she began raised her head to her mate, Appledusk but her words were cut off. Instead of seeing a warm welcoming grin from what she expected from a tom seeing his mate and kits in a long time, his green eyes were; cold, unwelcoming, bitter, angry and questioning. As she lay there, with her kits in her arms, her heart, which was soaring only a few heartbeats ago, was sinking like a boulder. They were his kits, they were family. Was wasn’t he pleased to see them? Wasn’t he pleased to see her?



“What were you thinking!?”, a loud and angry she-cat’s voice rang throughout the whole forest, breaking into Mapleshade’s swarming clouds of dark thoughts. Mapleshade turned sharply to meet the glare of Eletail, both of their tails lashing. Mapleshade knew this cat from reputation alone; Senior Warrior, Retired queen, mentor of three separate apprentices and proud mother of two successful litters. Her graying muzzle and battle-worn pelt certainly showed that. Eletail continued her rant, “Making 2 moon old kits swim in a river? With high currents? One of them almost drowned!”, her eyes flickering towards Patchkit. She didn’t make them swim, she carried them, Larchkit and Petalkit were almost completely dry, Mapleshade thought her unspoken argument. “You know , it just shows how terrible of mother you are when you need a cat from another clan to save your own kit.”, she muttered. Mapleshade’s fur flared, claws scraping across the stone under her paws. How dare you! Mapleshade secretly shouted in her head. But she fought back the snarl forming in her throat. Despite how much she hated it, she had to be remind calm and friendly if she wanted any chance of being accepted into Riverclan and giving her kits a future.



What she did and said in those next few moments could decide everything. Eletail flicked her tail tip and tried to nose Mapleshade to her paws, “Come on”, Eletail urged sternly, “You or your kits shouldn't be on Riverclan territory. We know a better way around the river, you can return home safely from there.”.  Just as Eletail and Splashfoot began to pad away, expecting Mapleshade to follow, she mewed, “Sorry but I can’t.”. Splashfoot halted, turning his head over his broad shoulder, “I’m sorry, what?”.

Mapleshade sat up, puffing up her chest. “We were kicked out by Oakstar.”, she explained, “We can’t go back to Thunderclan anymore.”. The two Riverclan warriors looked at each other, confused. Appledusk continued to hover in background. Splashfoot took a step forward, sniffing at the kits huddled together behind Mapleshade’s front legs, “So why bring them here?”.


Mapleshade let out a long lasting sigh. Her blood boiling from the growing bread of the terrifying moment that loomed over her. No going back now. She glanced at Appledusk, still as silent and stiff as a frozen tree trunk. “I was hoping you could let us join Riverclan.”, she simply said. Splashfoot snorted, “And would we take in Thunderclan exiles?”, he mewed with a taunting tone. Swallowing back another sigh, Mapleshade readied herself for the answer that would change everything. There was no point in lying now. She twisted her tail around her kits, protecting them if something went wrong. “Because those ain’t just Thunderclan kits. They’ve got Riverclan blood in them as well!”, she declared. Eletail’s muscles strained, “How?”, she snarled.  


“Because Appledusk is their father!”, she announce. The truth was out…


All eyes widen in shock, including the two Riverclan warriors and her own kits. Even Appledusk shifted uneasily in his sitting position, surprised that she had the guts to tell their ultimate secret like that. Splashfoot twisted on his front paw to directly face his clanmate, his smokey grey tail bushed up, making him look as a huge as a Lionclan warrior. “Traitor!”, he yowled, lunging, claws first, straight towards the brown tom. Then Eletail run in, rearing up and grabbing Splashfoot by the scruff mid-air and slamming him onto the hard earth. The struggling cats spat in hatred, “Why are you defending him?”.

Eletail had her fur on end and ears flatten, clearing finding it hard not to rip the fur off of Appledusk herself. Ignoring the cat flailing under her weight, her attention turned to Appledusk, “Is it true? Are you the father of Mapleshade’s kits?”, she asked while growling. Appledusk took while before answering his expression blank, “Yes.”, he finally admitted. Petalkit dashed from under Mapleshade before she could grab the she-kit. Petalkit stared at Appledusk with wide eyes. “You can’t be our father”, she shouted. It pained Mapleshade to see her daughter like this, “I’m sorry Petalkit, but he is your father.”, trying to soothe the distressed young cat. “But I don’t want him to be my father. He smells funny, he’s from Riverclan and all the elders were telling me how he’s the one who killed Birchface and Flowerpaw!”.


Larchkit joined in beside his sister, facing Mapleshade while Patchkit crowded under her, “We don’t want a killer as a father!”. All the cats around the kits looked at them, speechless. Guilt flooded over Mapleshade. Maybe she should never let Appledusk be the father of her kin, if it caused them this much shame and horror. Surprisingly, Appledusk finally spoke properly, coming to his own defense, “It was accident. I would never kill a warrior let alone an apprentice out of cold blood like that.”. Both kits reminded silent.

No one dared move. It felt as if time itself had stopped. Splashfoot had finally calmed down, going limp, so Eletail stopped pinning him down, allowing him to stand. Eletail bared her white longs fangs, “We’re taking you and your kits back to camp. Only Darkstar will know how to deal with this situation.”. Mapleshade hesitantly nodded, “Fine.”.

The group set off, leaving the river behind them and padding into the tree-line. Mapleshade felt slightly relieved to get away from the thing that had almost taken her kits away forever. With Eletail marching on ahead and Splashfoot at the rear to make sure no one tried to make an escape, leaving Mapleshade and Appledusk to awkwardly walk side by side.  She wanted to say something but didn’t want to risk making anything worse. Instead she made a more subtle move, twinning her thick tail with his long short-haired one.  No one noticed but Appledusk. He gave off a sad yet for some reason guilty smile.


A hunched up Larchkit was grasped in her mouth. Out of all of her kits, she feared he most likely would do something outrageous. He was pulling off a strope, tightening up in annoyance. Clearly hating be carried. Patchkit and Petalkit stayed as close to Mapleshade as possible, scared of this alien territory. They’ll get use to it once we’re here for a while, she told herself.  They were heading to the camp now, all she needed to do was get their sympathy. Maybe, just maybe, getting exiled was a part of a destiny for greater things. What was Starclan planning for them?





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Writing (c) Me.
Warrior Cats (c) Erin Hunter. 


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DracoScatchmore Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi there!

Thanks a lot for faving my first painting ;)

Have a nice day!

Greets,
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Mellowix Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student
No problem! 
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Nightcloudfox Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  New Deviant
May I use one of your art pieces for soemthing called animaljam wiki clans? I would just use it and give credit to you. I need permission first though! It would be nice of you to let me :D
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Mellowix Featured By Owner Edited 5 days ago  Student
(Sorry for late reply) Which art do you want use specially? 
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punkill-universe Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
thanks for the favs :happybounce: La la la la 
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No problem! 
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:) (Smile) ;) (Wink) 
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DutchMarshmallow Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, sorry for not doing the map warrior thing yet.
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Mellowix Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Student
Though I admit, it would be nice if you managed to complete it soon. 
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I'm taking a break from my computer right now, but when I'm back it'll be the first thing I'll do
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